Topic: Should all zoos and aquariums be closed?
General Purpose:
To persuade.
Specific Purpose:
To persuade my audience that all kinds of zoos and aquariums should be closed.
Introduction
Attention Getter: Did you know that 75% of animals kept in zoos and aquariums are abused? An animal in a zoo does not correctly get the environment it needs. The kind of food they need, they cannot get natural food from zoos or aquariums.
Credibility Statement:
Although from the outside, animals in zoos and aquariums look very beautiful. But we cannot perceive the physical suffering these animals suffer. However, many may claim that species are saved from extinction by zoos or aquariums. I have been involved in zoo and aquarium-related work for two years. I now understand that animals should not be kept in zoos and aquariums.
Thesis Statement: Although all zoos and aquariums should be closed, everyone must discuss and understand this.
Preview of Main Points:
- First, I will describe why all zoos and aquariums should be closed.
- Then, I will highlight some downsides of keeping animals in zoos and aquariums.
- Finally, I will present a differentiating explanation of why all zoos and aquariums should be closed.
Body
When we go to a zoo and aquarium, we see the animals there and think that the animals are living very happily. We feel that these animals are being provided food like time and taken care of so that the animals in this zoo are living a very healthy life. But in most cases, what is seen from the outside, but inside is not so happy.
Transition
Imagine you are six years old and someone enters your home, killing your aunt and perhaps your older brother before kidnapping you and taking you somewhere. Your mother suffers tremendously from being cut off from her loved ones. You are transported somewhere unknown and put in a jail where onlookers watch you for amusement. Through this, a realistic picture emerges and the transformation of an animal into a zoo animal.
First, the kind of environment an animal needs, in most cases, does not get that environment. In zoos or aquariums, they have to live in a specific place, making it very difficult to live their everyday lives.
The second is that in a natural environment, an animal receives the support it receives from its surroundings, but not in a zoo or aquarium. In maximum cases, animals are not adequately cared for in zoos. Every animal is subjected to neglect and torture. The kind of food an animal needs every day but doesn't get in a zoo. While parks claim that conservation is the primary reason they remain open, around half of all organizations contribute 1% of their budget.
Although they try their best to provide complete care and all kinds of facilities to all animals kept in zoos and aquariums. All things considered, however, zoos and aquariums should be closed.
Conclusion
Review of main points:
- Animal care in zoos and aquariums is neglected.
- Animals often do not get the right amount of food and the type of food they eat.
- Because of all these qualities, all zoos and aquariums should be closed.
Restate Thesis: All zoos and aquariums should be closed down due to neglect of animal care, lack of adequate food, and sufficient space in zoos and aquariums.
Closure: I have tried to show why zoos and aquariums should be closed. After knowing these things, I hope you understand why all zoos and aquariums should be closed.
Tags:
persuasive speech